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All sample answersGeneral Task 2 · 276 words
Healthy eating: prices or education?
Compare two policy approaches without making unsupported promises about their effects.
Study the method: Discussion essays: cover both views and your opinion →
Worked example: Trace paragraph progression through the complete healthy-food discussion →
Develop the topic: Health essays: compare food policies, weigh remote access and address participation barriers →
Band 7 goal: Argument development
Develop and connect relevant ideas or select and compare the most useful details. This is a study route, not an examiner score assigned to the answer. How IELTS Writing is assessed.
The question
Some people believe governments should make unhealthy food more expensive. Others believe education is a better solution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The sample answer
People disagree about whether higher prices or better education would be more effective in encouraging healthy eating. Increasing the cost of unhealthy products may influence some purchases, but I believe that education, supported by affordable alternatives, offers a fairer and more lasting approach.
There is a reasonable argument for using prices to discourage unhealthy choices. When a sugary drink costs noticeably more than water, a shopper with a limited budget may choose the cheaper option. Price changes also reach people who would never attend a nutrition class or read advice about their diet. However, the effect depends on what alternatives are available and how strongly customers prefer the original product. Some may continue buying it and simply spend less on other necessities. A policy intended to improve health could therefore place additional pressure on households that already struggle financially.
Education can address a different part of the problem: people may not know how to prepare satisfying meals from inexpensive ingredients. Practical cooking lessons at school or in community centres could show learners how to plan meals, read food labels and use leftovers safely. These are skills that apply across many shopping decisions rather than to a single taxed product. Nevertheless, information alone is not enough if fresh food is difficult to obtain or families have very little time to cook. Educational programmes should therefore be accompanied by efforts to make convenient, nutritious options easier to find.
In conclusion, higher prices can provide an incentive to change, but they may also burden people without helping them choose better meals. Education is the stronger starting point because it builds useful skills, particularly when healthy alternatives are genuinely accessible.
Vocabulary in context
Each phrase appears in the answer above. Learn how it works, not just a replacement word.
- affordable alternatives
- Other choices that people can reasonably pay for.
Affordable is relative to people's resources; it does not necessarily mean the cheapest.
- place additional pressure on
- Make an existing difficult situation harder for someone.
Use on before the affected person, group or system.
- an incentive to change
- A reason that encourages someone to behave differently.
An incentive to is followed by a verb; an incentive for is followed by a noun.
Now make it your own
Plan the opposite position: prefer targeted price changes while acknowledging their limits. Give one reason and one developed example for your position.
For a smaller practice step, use the explanation, knowledge check and self-review exercise in Develop one idea into a paragraph.
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Open the writing workspaceMore examples of this question type
Explain both viewpoints fairly and give your own judgement when the question asks for it.