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Academic Task 2 · 332 words

Children’s learning websites: funding and trust

Explain the case for advertising revenue fairly, then judge whether keeping lessons free justifies commercial messages within children’s learning websites.

Study the method: Discussion essays: cover both views and your opinion →

Worked example: Test what an advertising safeguard would actually solve →

Band 7 goal: Balanced discussion

Develop and connect relevant ideas or select and compare the most useful details. This is a study route, not an examiner score assigned to the answer. How IELTS Writing is assessed.

The question

Some people support allowing advertising on free learning websites designed for children because it helps pay for the service. Others believe these websites should contain no commercial advertising. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The sample answer

Free educational websites need resources to create lessons and keep them available. Advertising offers one way to meet these costs, whereas an advertising-free service must obtain support elsewhere. Although the funding argument deserves serious consideration, I believe websites designed for children to learn should remain free of commercial advertising.

Supporters of advertising can reasonably argue that free access is valuable only if a service can survive. Preparing suitable exercises, updating explanations and maintaining a website all require time or money. An advertising-funded provider could spread these costs across commercial partners instead of charging each family. For example, a household unable to afford several subscriptions might still use free reading and mathematics activities. Supporters might also propose clearly separated, labelled advertisements so that learners can distinguish them from the lesson itself. These safeguards would make the proposal more careful than simply filling every page with sales messages, and the loss of a useful free resource is a real cost to consider.

Nevertheless, opponents have a strong reason to protect the purpose of the learning environment. A child following a trusted exercise may encounter a commercial message beside it and treat the product as connected with the activity. A label can identify the message, but it does not remove the invitation to leave the lesson or ask for a purchase. If an exercise rewards progress with a product promotion, the distinction becomes even harder to maintain. I therefore favour keeping commercial messages out of these websites. Donations or partnerships with schools could be explored instead, although they might not cover the same range of activities. A smaller, well-supported collection of lessons would be preferable to making purchasing prompts part of the learning experience.

In conclusion, advertising revenue could widen access by helping providers avoid subscription charges. However, access should be weighed against the character of the space children use for learning. I would prioritise an advertising-free environment, even if that required a more limited service, rather than treat every funding opportunity as educationally acceptable.

Vocabulary in context

Each phrase appears in the answer above. Learn how it works, not just a replacement word.

free access
The ability to use a service without paying a charge.

Distinguish no charge to the family from no cost to the provider.

commercial message
A communication intended to promote a product or service.

Use this for the advertisement, not as a synonym for the educational explanation beside it.

weighed against
Considered in comparison with a competing concern or benefit.

Name the competing values and explain which receives priority instead of merely listing them.

Now make it your own

Write a position favouring carefully controlled advertising. Give the no-advertising view a fair reason, explain one enforceable limit and acknowledge what that limit would not solve. Check that your conclusion supports the same position as your introduction.

For a smaller practice step, use the explanation, knowledge check and self-review exercise in Develop one idea into a paragraph.

The practice link opens the original question, not a copy of this answer.

Open the writing workspace

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