Academic Task 2 · 299 words
Outdoor play: match causes with responses
Explain two causes and connect each to a practical response without blaming every family or treating all screen use alike.
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Band 7 goal: Cause–solution links
Develop and connect relevant ideas or select and compare the most useful details. This is a study route, not an examiner score assigned to the answer. How IELTS Writing is assessed.
The question
Children now spend more time using digital devices than playing outdoors. Why is this happening, and what can be done to encourage outdoor activity?
The sample answer
Digital devices occupy a growing part of many children's free time, sometimes at the expense of outdoor play. This is not simply a matter of children preferring screens. Attractive online activities and limited opportunities to play outside can both contribute, so an effective response should address both the home routine and the local environment.
One reason is that digital entertainment is easy to begin and often continues without a natural stopping point. A child can move from one short video to another without arranging an activity or leaving home. Online games may also be where friends already meet, making a device socially attractive rather than merely convenient. At the same time, playing outside may require an adult to accompany the child. Where roads are busy or suitable spaces are far away, a parent working irregular hours may find that difficult. The indoor option can therefore become the default even when the family would welcome more outdoor activity.
Families could respond to the first problem by agreeing on predictable times to stop using devices and preparing an appealing alternative in advance. Arranging a regular game with nearby friends is more likely to work than simply telling a child to go outside alone. Schools and local organisations could address the second barrier by offering supervised outdoor activities close to where children live. For example, a school playground could host a scheduled after-school session with appropriate supervision. This would not solve every family's timing difficulties, but it would give some children a safe, accessible place to be active.
In short, screens compete successfully because they are engaging and immediately available, while outdoor play may be harder to organise. Clear household routines and convenient, supervised local opportunities should therefore work together rather than placing the entire responsibility on children to change their habits.
Vocabulary in context
Each phrase appears in the answer above. Learn how it works, not just a replacement word.
- at the expense of
- In a way that reduces or harms something else.
Use of before the activity that receives less time or attention.
- the default
- The choice that happens unless someone actively chooses otherwise.
Here it describes a habitual outcome, not a computer setting.
- in advance
- Before the relevant event or activity happens.
Place it after an action such as prepare or arrange; do not add a second before.
Now make it your own
Choose one barrier in your area and write a cause–solution paragraph. Name who could act, what they would do and how that action addresses the barrier.
For a smaller practice step, use the explanation, knowledge check and self-review exercise in Answer the question you were given.
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Open the writing workspaceMore examples of this question type
Answer the requested problems or causes, then explain how specific solutions address them.