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General Task 2 · 298 words

Local shopping: problems and practical responses

Keep the focus on community consequences and propose measures that respond to them without dismissing online shopping's convenience.

Study the method: Problems, causes and solutions: match the response to the question →

Band 7 goal: Cause–solution links

Develop and connect relevant ideas or select and compare the most useful details. This is a study route, not an examiner score assigned to the answer. How IELTS Writing is assessed.

The question

More people are buying goods online instead of using local shops. What problems can this cause for communities, and what measures could encourage people to shop locally?

The sample answer

Online shopping offers convenience and a wide choice of goods, but a shift away from local shops can create difficulties for the communities around them. The main concerns are the loss of useful nearby services and a less active town centre. Encouraging local shopping requires practical improvements, not simply appeals to customers' loyalty.

When too few people use a local shop, its owner may be unable to cover the costs of keeping it open. A closure can be particularly inconvenient for residents who cannot easily travel elsewhere or place orders online. Losing a small hardware shop, for example, means that a simple repair may involve a much longer journey to obtain one inexpensive part. Several closures can also leave a shopping street with fewer reasons for people to visit. Nearby cafés and other businesses may then receive less passing trade, while residents lose places where brief, everyday conversations used to take place.

Local businesses could make themselves easier to use by offering clear online information about stock and a collection service for items reserved in advance. This would combine some of the convenience of online shopping with immediate local access. Councils could support shopping streets through safe walking routes, accessible bus stops and well-maintained public spaces, where these are currently lacking. Joint events organised by neighbouring traders might also give people a reason to visit several businesses on one trip. These measures should be designed around local needs: an occasional festival alone would not compensate for shops that are difficult to reach throughout the rest of the year.

In conclusion, declining local trade can reduce access to useful services and weaken activity in shared public places. Convenient purchasing options and better everyday access are therefore more convincing responses than expecting shoppers to abandon online retail out of obligation.

Vocabulary in context

Each phrase appears in the answer above. Learn how it works, not just a replacement word.

passing trade
Customers attracted while travelling past a business.

Trade is uncountable in this expression; avoid adding a or plural s.

reserved in advance
Kept for someone because they requested it before collecting it.

Specify what is reserved so the phrase does not become a vague recommendation.

compensate for
Make up for a disadvantage or something that is missing.

Use for before the problem; compensate someone for a loss is a different pattern.

Now make it your own

Develop one measure for a town where most shoppers rely on buses. Explain how it addresses a specific community problem rather than just increasing sales.

For a smaller practice step, use the explanation, knowledge check and self-review exercise in Answer the question you were given.

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Answer the requested problems or causes, then explain how specific solutions address them.