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Academic Task 2 · 287 words

Free transport: test the proposed solution

Distinguish affordability from a policy's ability to reduce traffic, and explain a qualified disagreement.

Study the method: Opinion essays: choose a position and develop your reasons →

Develop the topic: Cities essays: test transport proposals, land-use choices and noise responses →

Band 7 goal: Argument development

Develop and connect relevant ideas or select and compare the most useful details. This is a study route, not an examiner score assigned to the answer. How IELTS Writing is assessed.

The question

Some people think public transport should be free in cities to reduce congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The sample answer

Making urban public transport free may appear to be a straightforward way to reduce congestion and pollution. Although removing fares would help some passengers, I do not agree that all services should be free for this purpose. Reliability and useful routes are often more important in persuading drivers to leave their cars behind.

There are clear benefits to reducing the cost of travel. Someone who struggles to pay a daily bus fare would have more money for other necessities, and occasional passengers might use the service more frequently. However, these changes would not necessarily reduce the number of cars on the road. A new passenger might previously have walked or cycled, while someone who already travelled by bus would simply make the same journey without paying. The environmental argument therefore depends on a change in behaviour among drivers, not just an increase in the total number of passenger trips.

For a driver, the practical quality of a service can be decisive. If a bus does not reach an industrial estate before an early shift starts, removing its fare will not make it a realistic option for the workers there. Extending the timetable or providing a direct connection could have a greater effect. Cities also need resources to maintain vehicles and provide enough capacity at busy times. A universal free-fare policy that leaves too little funding for these tasks could make services less attractive. Targeted discounts, combined with improvements to routes and frequency, would better address both affordability and usefulness.

Overall, affordable public transport matters, but a free service is not automatically an effective substitute for a car. I would prioritise reliable coverage and assistance for passengers who need it rather than abolishing fares across an entire city.

Vocabulary in context

Each phrase appears in the answer above. Learn how it works, not just a replacement word.

a change in behaviour
A difference in what people actually do.

Explain whose behaviour must change and why; do not leave the phrase abstract.

a realistic option
A choice that can work under the actual conditions.

The article a is needed when referring to one possible choice.

targeted discounts
Price reductions intended for particular groups or needs.

Name the intended passengers when developing the policy in more detail.

Now make it your own

Replace the early-shift example with a parent travelling with young children. Explain which service feature would affect that person's choice and why.

For a smaller practice step, use the explanation, knowledge check and self-review exercise in Develop one idea into a paragraph.

The practice link opens the original question, not a copy of this answer.

Open the writing workspace

More examples of this question type

State how far you agree, then develop reasons that support the same position throughout.