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Tourism and traditions: causes, then judgement
Separate the explanation of cultural change from an evaluation that recognises both economic support and loss of local meaning.
Study the method: Reasons and evaluation: positive/negative and outweigh questions →
Worked example: Separate the cause of cultural change from your judgement of it →
Band 7 goal: Causes and evaluation
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The question
International tourism can sometimes cause local traditions and cultures to become less distinctive. Why does this happen, and is this a positive or negative development?
The sample answer
International tourism can support cultural activities, yet it can also make the traditions of different places look increasingly similar. This happens partly because businesses adapt to visitors' expectations and simplify what they offer. I consider the loss of local distinctiveness mainly negative, even though the income from tourism can help some traditions continue.
Visitors often have limited time and may know little about the meaning of a local custom. Businesses therefore have a reason to present activities in a form that is easy to recognise, photograph and fit into a short visit. A ceremony linked to a particular season might be performed every evening for an audience, while a complicated craft could be replaced by a quickly produced souvenir. When similar products sell well in several destinations, traders may begin offering the same designs. Over time, the commercial version can become more visible than the locally meaningful practice from which it developed.
There is an important benefit to acknowledge: visitors may provide an income for people who would otherwise struggle to continue making traditional products or teaching their skills. A performance adapted for outsiders is not automatically without value. Nevertheless, the change becomes damaging when residents have little say in how their culture is represented or when the original activity is displaced. Younger people might then learn only the version designed for customers, with less understanding of its community purpose. In my view, preserving residents' ability to practise and shape their traditions matters more than maximising the number of convenient attractions available to tourists.
Overall, tourism can make traditions more uniform by rewarding familiar, simplified experiences. Although the resulting income has value, losing local control and meaning is a greater cost. The benefits are strongest when visitor-facing activities support, rather than replace, traditions within the community.
Vocabulary in context
Each phrase appears in the answer above. Learn how it works, not just a replacement word.
- local distinctiveness
- The qualities that make a particular place different from others.
Link the phrase to a specific custom, product or practice when developing an example.
- have little say
- Have limited influence over a decision.
Follow with in how or in what to identify the decision being discussed.
- is displaced
- Is pushed out or replaced by something else.
The passive form focuses on the practice being replaced; explain what replaces it.
Now make it your own
Write a new evaluation paragraph taking a mainly positive view. Keep the explanation of why traditions change separate from your judgement of that change.
For a smaller practice step, use the explanation, knowledge check and self-review exercise in Answer the question you were given.
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Explain why the change happens and evaluate it separately. Answer both parts explicitly.